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She has a Raven belt.

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:iconaqua-limeade:
Mm. I love her pose~ And the belt, too :B

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What did one saggy boob say to the other saggy boob?

"We better get some support around here or people are gonna think we're nuts!"
:iconangiechen:
>_< man.... I wish my anatomy drawing was just as great as this!!! O_O AHHHH!!! I hope she don't stab me!!

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What's done is done, what's there is there.
What ever happens next, I'll wait and bare!
:iconcorianthana:
Nah she's nice. c:And you really only get better at anatomy by observing and drawing others alot. Which I do in class all the time. xD
:iconangiechen:
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh.... okay!!! :D

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What's done is done, what's there is there.
What ever happens next, I'll wait and bare!
:iconasheinma:
I like this, it's really nice. Though you can always learn more anatomy.
If you don't mind...
Legs are a little short compared to the body length. And you could probably add a little more definition on her calves so it doesn't look like straight bone.
I like your foreshortening. It makes sense and it's not all weird and distorted like I see with a lot of people. Keep it up!
Lastly, her jaw doesn't sit well with me O.o
Other than those few things, I like it. I really like your style. It sets you apart from a LOT of people on DA, which is great in my books <3

But to your last comments above, just plain observing and drawing a lot doesn't get that far. trust me. I'm currently attending the Art Institute here in my city and my Life Drawing instructor teaches solely anatomy. I learned a lot from him because he gets very specific about bones and muscle and how they work. I've had a huge change in my anatomy ever since.
So, my suggestion to you is to maybe look up some books on anatomy (real people) that goes into detail about bones and muscle anatomy. They REALLY help! I can pretty much say that your anatomy is pretty good through observation though.

Anyways, I hope this helps. I'm sorry if I offended you with this but I'm just trying to help you out a bit since I can definitely see some great stuff out of you in the future.

Keep up the great work!! I'll definitely be watching you.
:iconcorianthana:
You didn't offend me at all, the main reason I really joined DA is to get critique on my art so I can improve, so thank you very much for taking the time to point everything out. ^^ I've been kinda realizing that I elongate the upper torso way too much in comparison to the legs, so yeah. xD

The mouth and jaw area I felt I should've improved on as you said.

And I'll try getting an anatomy book if some extra money comes my way. Thanks again for the critique. x3
:iconasheinma:
NP ^_^ I rarely comment on peoples work =3 I should really do it more often XD
:iconcorianthana:
It can really help alot. ^^

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